Official Review: Refuge by mike Shellenbergar
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I understand the author's desire to present the primitive and wild western scenery, but the first chapter has too much description of the environment, and it does not serve the plot or the character of the protagonist.
Starting from the second chapter, I finally saw the protagonist communicating with others, and the pale dialogue made it difficult for me to believe that this would be a good story.
Maybe for me, a fast-paced story is more in line with my appetite.
The story unfolds too slowly, and the description of the environment is useless and lengthy. OK, I may be too harsh.
However, if you want to find a better story, it should not be too difficult.

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