Review of Romance Trilogy Book 1 - Endless Echoes of the Soul

Post by **Bethel Saint Bright** » 06 Nov 2024, 04:29

[Following is a volunteer review of "Romance Trilogy Book 1 - Endless Echoes of the Soul" by M. R. Avis.]

5 out of 5 stars

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"Romance Trilogy Book 1 - Endless Echoes of the Soul" by M. R. Avis tells the tale of the forbidden love and romance between a moon god priestess, Amina, and a Nilevalor warrior, Ahmed. As a priestess, Amina is to have no sexual involvement with another man. As the commander of the Nilevalor warriors, the king has asked Ahmed to marry the princess, Elara. Meanwhile, in a previous lifetime, Amina and Ahmed were involved in a romance that faced challenges. In the present lifetime, their love is threatened by societal obligations and enemies from a previous lifetime. Will they eventually be together in this lifetime?

I enjoy reading romance stories, even though I can't entirely agree with some of the outcomes. However, the mere fact that people are willing to go to any length, including dying, to show how much they love someone stimulates me. This book perfectly tells a romance story that keeps readers glued to their seats from start to finish.

Each chapter of the book (except Chapter 17) was told from either Ahmed's or Amina's point of view. This first-person narrative style helped me see the story from each main character's perspective. Also, not focusing on one character's POV provided a balance to the story being told. For instance, I could use Ahmed's dreams to get some missing details from Amina's dreams of their past lives.

I liked that I was not confused about each character's name and role in their present lifetime and previous existence. It was easy for me to know that Ahmed, the commander of Nilevalor warriors, used to be Seth, the king's cupbearer's son. I also did not struggle to connect Amina, the moon god priestess, to Nerti, the king's daughter. Even their adversaries were not difficult to identify, both in the present and in the past. Although I would have enjoyed encountering some difficulties in making these connections, I didn't mind how easy the author made it, as it helped me flow seamlessly with the story.

This book was not a complicated read, even though it constantly moved from the present to the past and back again. However, there were surprises the author sprung in the book that made me scream. Just when I thought I had figured out the story's main villain, the author switched things up. There was an unlikely villain in the story. I'd allow readers to find out for themselves.

I did my best to find a fault in this book but couldn't. The author knew what to do and did it excellently. The editors also did a fantastic job of making the book free of grammar and spelling issues. I have no choice but to rate it a 5 out of 5. I recommend the book to lovers of ancient romance stories about forbidden love.

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Gerry Steen · Post by **Gerry Steen** » 29 Nov 2024, 21:38

Bethel Saint Bright wrote: ↑06 Nov 2024, 04:29 [Following is a volunteer review of "Romance Trilogy Book 1 - Endless Echoes of the Soul" by M. R. Avis.]

5 out of 5 stars
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"Romance Trilogy Book 1 - Endless Echoes of the Soul" by M. R. Avis tells the tale of the forbidden love and romance between a moon god priestess, Amina, and a Nilevalor warrior, Ahmed. As a priestess, Amina is to have no sexual involvement with another man. As the commander of the Nilevalor warriors, the king has asked Ahmed to marry the princess, Elara. Meanwhile, in a previous lifetime, Amina and Ahmed were involved in a romance that faced challenges. In the present lifetime, their love is threatened by societal obligations and enemies from a previous lifetime. Will they eventually be together in this lifetime?

I enjoy reading romance stories, even though I can't entirely agree with some of the outcomes. However, the mere fact that people are willing to go to any length, including dying, to show how much they love someone stimulates me. This book perfectly tells a romance story that keeps readers glued to their seats from start to finish.

Each chapter of the book (except Chapter 17) was told from either Ahmed's or Amina's point of view. This first-person narrative style helped me see the story from each main character's perspective. Also, not focusing on one character's POV provided a balance to the story being told. For instance, I could use Ahmed's dreams to get some missing details from Amina's dreams of their past lives.

I liked that I was not confused about each character's name and role in their present lifetime and previous existence. It was easy for me to know that Ahmed, the commander of Nilevalor warriors, used to be Seth, the king's cupbearer's son. I also did not struggle to connect Amina, the moon god priestess, to Nerti, the king's daughter. Even their adversaries were not difficult to identify, both in the present and in the past. Although I would have enjoyed encountering some difficulties in making these connections, I didn't mind how easy the author made it, as it helped me flow seamlessly with the story.

This book was not a complicated read, even though it constantly moved from the present to the past and back again. However, there were surprises the author sprung in the book that made me scream. Just when I thought I had figured out the story's main villain, the author switched things up. There was an unlikely villain in the story. I'd allow readers to find out for themselves.

I did my best to find a fault in this book but couldn't. The author knew what to do and did it excellently. The editors also did a fantastic job of making the book free of grammar and spelling issues. I have no choice but to rate it a 5 out of 5. I recommend the book to lovers of ancient romance stories about forbidden love.

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I have only read two romance type books in my whole life. This book will be the third one due to your review of it. It sounds like a fun book to read. The fact that it has a backdrop of ancient times and that it is error free makes me want to read it even more. Thank you for this review.

Ifeanyi Nwokike · Post by **Ifeanyi Nwokike** » 30 Nov 2024, 09:18

This is forbidden love indeed. How will Amina and Ahmed overcome the limitations placed by their sacred duties to be together? This is an interesting romance book. I will check it out.

Wen Casey · Post by **Wen Casey** » 02 Dec 2024, 04:01

This seems like a book about reincarnations. Although I don't believe the concept of reincarnation, I think I like the storyline of this book. It presents an interesting love story across lifetimes. Well done on your amazing review.

Princevic Ekeoma · Post by **Princevic Ekeoma** » 02 Dec 2024, 04:10

Apart from what is portrayed in romance books, humans are built to love and do anything for what they love, including dieing. It's crazy but a hard reality. I haven't been in that place before and I hope I don't have to because I don't know what I'd do.

Isaac Ozo-okafor · Post by **Isaac Ozo-okafor** » 02 Dec 2024, 04:21

The POV of a book is very important and must help the book deliver its message accurately. I agree with you that the author was wise in using the first-person POV. Moreso, the author focused on the two main character to tell a complete tale. Your review is nice, though.

Bernard Ndubuisi · Post by **Bernard Ndubuisi** » 04 Dec 2024, 07:04

I personally like straightforward stories. I sometimes cringe when authors have to take me on a back and forth journey through time, especially without notice. I guess this book is a bit different. Meanwhile, the storyline seems exciting.

Post by **Amarachi Stephanie Ejike** » 05 Dec 2024, 07:41

This is a love story that cuts across time and dispensations. I like the premise and I enjoyed reading your review. Well done.

Isaac Chiso · Post by **Isaac Chiso** » 08 Dec 2024, 05:04

“Romance Trilogy Book 1 – Endless Echoes of the Soul” by M.R. Avis is a story of forbidden love between a moon god priestess Amina and Nilevalor warrior Ahmed, who meet in different lifetimes, but are torn between duty and past enemies.

Lene Lena · Post by **Lene Lena** » 08 Jan 2025, 08:06

It’s wonderful to hear that you enjoy romance stories and appreciate the depth of love portrayed in Amina and Ahmed’s journey. The tension between societal obligations and personal desires is indeed a compelling theme.