Review of Fall of the Raven

[Mutai Marshal]

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Fall of the Raven" by Thymournia.]

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5 out of 5 stars

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Fall of the Raven is a short poetic book relaying the protagonist's somewhat hopeless world in a lonely space. Motivated by his previous works, the author uses the raven, including graphical presentations, to talk about life. It is written from the first-person point of view, giving the book a personal touch.

My favorite part was how the author explored various stylistic devices to relay the message. For instance, the rhyming phrases in some parts of the book made the reading memorable. The symbolism used aids in comprehending the protagonist's hopeless situation. I could imagine sailing in a deep ocean alone with no shore to eventually get to. Furthermore, I felt that the use of a raven was appropriate because it delivered a sophisticated illustration of the protagonist's world.

Moreover, vivid descriptions took center stage in this poetic book. I could picture the winter conditions that deprive and suffocate life out of flora and make it difficult for humans to thrive. Readers, therefore, can fathom the protagonist's universe and certainly develop a connection with the main character.

Despite the author's impeccable creativity, I struggled to fully grasp some parts of the book due to his commanding poetic complexity, typical of many poems. However, this will not be a problem for those who relish poetry and can crack puzzles in them. I also struggled with the small font used. I was forced to zoom the writing, slowing my reading experience constantly. These issues were minor and did not necessitate any deductions. Therefore, I am obliged to rate Fall of the Raven by Thymournia Ali Sheikhaleslami five out of five stars because creativity illuminates its pages.

The book contains a few minor grammatical errors. However, they were few and did not diminish the book's value. I gladly recommend this book to enthusiasts of poetry. However, readers should be aware that the book is replete with moments of despair and glumness.

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[Mojisola Omowunmi Omotosho]

Your review of "Fall of the Raven" by Thymournia Ali Sheikhaleslami beautifully captures the essence of the book. The way you describe the author's use of stylistic devices and vivid descriptions to convey the protagonist's desolate world is captivating. Your appreciation for the creativity and the personal touch in the first-person narrative shines through. Great job highlighting both the strengths and minor challenges you encountered. Your recommendation is thoughtful and insightful!

[Mercy Ndungu 9]

Your review of Fall of the Raven by Thymournia Ali Sheikhaleslami captures the book's essence well. The use of a raven as a symbol and the first-person narrative style provide a personal and introspective exploration of the protagonist’s lonely and desolate world. Your appreciation of the stylistic devices, such as rhyming and vivid descriptions, reflects the depth and creativity of the author's work.

[patricia MGBEMENA]

The author's choice of using of raven to pass the message and aim of the book. I would love to understand how the raven suits the image of the protagonist.

[Leslie coccia]

Even though the themes of the poetry in this book are along the lines of hopelessness and depression, it seems like it’s really well done. The use of a Raven as a symbol of the author’s world is fun, and brings to mind the tone of Edgar Allen Poe. Good review!