What Grace Means to Me

Jennifer Humphrey 5 · Post by **Jennifer Humphrey 5** » 12 Jan 2025, 05:16

“To love and appreciate, without jealousy, cowardly possessiveness, or controlling anger” the phrase you use here just really hit me in the heart. I have loved so possessively, jealously, and with such anger resulting from the jealousy that it nearly destroyed me. Your poem is beautifully written. I think that anyone that reads it can find a phrase or two that hits home for them. Hope to see more.

Vivien Tawiyah · Post by **Vivien Tawiyah** » 12 Jan 2025, 08:51

This piece is so profound and seems to be all encompassing of the vicissitudes of life's circumstances.
It embraces various forms of paradoxical scenarios of both abstract and concrete imagery; that gives it some form of sensory details drawn from one's personal life's experience and general experience e.g on the phrase, "To do without trying”
Note that there was a repetition of "To" which can be replaced with other participial phrases and syntaxes.

Very engaging piece. Good job

Zhenya Cox · Post by **Zhenya Cox** » 12 Jan 2025, 10:20

I like it, very relatable.

Gontse Badirwang · Post by **Gontse Badirwang** » 12 Jan 2025, 10:21

It is motivating and openly..good for depressed teenagers who are going through pain.

Ana Aragon 2 · Post by **Ana Aragon 2** » 12 Jan 2025, 11:31

Me gustó mucho .Es una reflexión para uno mismo..

Deiris Frazier · Post by **Deiris Frazier** » 12 Jan 2025, 14:20

The poem has so much reality and truth in it. What ever you are going through while reading this poem hopefully it brings some balance to your inner peace.

Zirkia Zirkia Gilmore · Post by **Zirkia Zirkia Gilmore** » 12 Jan 2025, 14:44

The thought procedure that was put into this poem, is polished while being very informative. The fundamental points are something that everyone in life can relate to, we all have to be thorough of that thin line. No one person is better than the next we are all fellow in our own unique way.

Jesica Gattie · Post by **Jesica Gattie** » 12 Jan 2025, 16:43

Powerful piece! I loved it. Very raw and well composed, with a lot of thought provoking points. I enjoyed it!

Christopher Smith 31 · Post by **Christopher Smith 31** » 12 Jan 2025, 16:47

Stinggily seeing myself as i read on . I thought you might wanted to tip you for it.. leave grace to them boys incarcerated or faceing time in solitaire confinement.

Genesia Gous 1 · Post by **Genesia Gous 1** » 12 Jan 2025, 17:12

A lovely poem, make you question who you are and how you want to be.

Kayleen Charles · Post by **Kayleen Charles** » 12 Jan 2025, 19:57

This poem is thought provoking. It causes you to exam yourself as you read. I enjoyed reading.

Janette Saini · Post by **Janette Saini** » 13 Jan 2025, 04:02

Yes it is, what grace should mean. A thoughtful pieces of words to define an absolute imperfect world we have and to do an not to do is the main thing.

Jeanette Gilliland · Post by **Jeanette Gilliland** » 13 Jan 2025, 09:43

You have clearly expressed to us what grace means to you. I love your version of grace.

Sabir Ansari · Post by **Sabir Ansari** » 13 Jan 2025, 15:35

The poetry convey life lesson. The message in the poetry is to live a life with full of energy and enjoy every moment in the life. And also be a kind with everyone. Nice one.

Joanne Francisco · Post by **Joanne Francisco** » 13 Jan 2025, 17:42

For me Grace is the face that love wears when it meets imperfection
It highlights how grace is a manifestation of love, especially in the presence of flaws and imperfection. Grace doesn’t demand perfection; instead, it accepts and uplifts despite shortcomings, showing unconditional love.just like how God's grace sustain us .
even how many times we fail him still his grace his sufficient in us