What Grace Means to Me

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Bi12
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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This is truly beautiful. I felt a deep calm and hope while reading your words. It reminded me how grace makes life softer even in pain. Thank you for sharing such a touching piece.
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I appreciate the way u put down every single emotions in such a way that we should learn how to show one's own emotions in a way, where we should respect our selves and also others
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Post by Zoya Shah 2 »

This piece gently shows how to live with strength but also kindness.
It reminds us to stay true, peaceful, and loving without losing ourselves.
Every line feels honest, like advice from someone who’s been through it.
It’s not just deep—it’s real, and it speaks to the heart.
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Post by Zoya Shah 2 »

This poem beautifully teaches how to stay strong, kind, and true to yourself.
It feels like heartfelt advice from someone who really understands life.
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Post by Khadija Ramzan 2 »

This heartfelt poem beautifully captures the quiet strength and comfort that grace brings to our lives. With simple yet powerful language, the poet reflects on forgiveness, inner peace, and the unspoken kindness that uplifts us even in our lowest moments. It's a gentle reminder that grace isn't just a word—it's a way of living with compassion and humility. A touching and inspiring piece.
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Post by Anita ilan »

There is only a thin line between good and bad, positivity and negativity in our lives. This poem clearly explains how to find the right balance. Amazing!
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Post by Milena Trajkovic »

I would say it's a poem about balance. I can find my thoughts in some quotes, all summed and explained in one poem and that's exactly what balance is.
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Wow! I really loved this. It is an incredible reminder of how to live our lives with integrity, perseverance and honor. Great writing!
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Thank you for the motivational poem.
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Post by Sithembinkosi Nyoni »

Profound "To love and appreciate without jealousy, cowardly possessiveness or controlling anger" wise words
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Post by Lovely Kumari 1 »

The poem is absolutely a masterpiece ; the entire poem feels like a wandering heart seeking for the true emotions lying beneath. The only thing I felt somewhat not perfect as the whole poem was this "kind but not dishonest" I think these two words are not making a match like wha rest were.
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Post by Teri WRight »

I love it! To me, it spoke more as affirmations, which need to be posted in public view for all to see then in a book to be pulled out when called from the soul. It's about being positive and grounding not only yourself but for others.
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Post by Dorothy Eccles »

I found this poem to be very interesting. Parts of it were very peaceful, but some not so peaceful. The one part I really not sure about the greedy and flesh.

To be motivated but on greedy. To treat your flesh as your temple, but not your true self confuses me a bit. I am not sure how to interpret that part.

My body is a temple from the Lord in which it houses my soul. The flesh that covers my body goes out into the world everyday, which is filled with hatred and evil everywhere you look. Through God's love and grace I can walk in this world wearing his armor of protection, and therefore I wake up everyday motivated and blessed that he has given me another day to share his love and accomplish all the things that he needs done each and everyday. I never want to follow a path of motivation that will lead into a path of greed.
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Post by Victoria Hollabaugh »

Thank you for this poem. It is very enlightening.
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Post by joanna sz »

"To achieve ultimate inner peace without having to first suffer ultimate outward devastation."That peace was powerful for me.
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