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Brineesha was shocked to see the red and blue beneath his clothes. Her own brother was Superman?
"Reason is intelligence taking exercise. Imagination is intelligence with an erection" -- Victor Hugo.
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The light increased revealing a baby dragon, with its claws embedded in the floor. Standing behind the winged serpent was a tall thin waif of a woman.
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She looked very familiar, and Brineesha couldn't place her finger on where she met this stranger. She hacked and hacked her brain and then the answer came. The solution to all their problems was...
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She sat quietly, despite all the commotion surrounding her, folded her legs and concentrated on the word "TRUTH." The vines encapsulating her and Brandon vanished. She closed her eyes, concentrating harder. Everything vanished. She opened her eyes, only vivid white emptiness appeared. She smiled. She knew soon he would come.
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"TRUTH" appeared in human form taking her away in a whirlwind, Brandon was left behind...
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Corvettes in a rainbow of colors, she jumps in a fire engine red one and takes off zooming down the German autobahn going 90, 100, 120. Such freedom destination unknown, suddenly...
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Everything disappeared and the world spun inside her head.
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Brineesha felt she will bring opprobrium upon the family name once again. Her vivid imagination has gotten her in trouble in the past and her psychiatrist is becoming alarmed.
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Clearly her meds weren't working.
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So she threw them all away and decided to move to Russia.
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No longer in the stranglehold of the powerful medications Brineesha begins anew. On her journey she meets...
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She meets thee Ghost of Christmas Past...
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Present and Future, so fallible, she's relapsing going through withdrawal and back into her world of fantasy. Or is it? Someone is watching her. Could it be...
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Could it be the fairy...

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