The Passing

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Vkorner10
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The Passing

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The Passing

So fragile.......the body is

But yet........not really

How quickly time goes.......

But yet.........not really

As we go through each day admiring nature at it's most beautiful state, we tend to miss any inconsistencies with our body's message

Do we take this miraculous machine for granted

Or yet......does it not matter.........

As long as we can still admire nature's beautiful gift.......

A daily gift we are sure to receive if we appreciate it

Indeed our body is the outermost shell of our existence........

It allows each being the ability to enjoy each day's gift and share it with others until it exists no more

Exist no more.........not really........

The body says an eternal goodnight......

However the welcoming beauty of the white light says "everything is going to be just fine".
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Bodies are ephemeral, but actions, thoughts and relationships are on a different level of time and effect altogether.
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