My dreamland

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vadakoot
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My dreamland

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In my dreamland I am composing a symphony
The stream flowing with its murmuring sound
will play the background music
Goldfishes jumping from the strem,glittering in the sun
Will be my dancers
Crickets hiding in pits in the green meadow
Will be my audience
listen,they're applauding me with their
Chirping sound
Trees are pouring their leaves and flowers
to congratulate me
Ha....what an artist could ever possibly want?
This is the land where dreams come alive
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Post by ChillFil »

Great stuff mate. I love the idea, gives me an "live life through myself" feel.

-- 22 Jun 2016, 20:49 --
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Thank you ChillFil ?
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Very nice!
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