Unrequited Love

[Jaime Lync]

Te amo tanto que me duele
You didn't get that did you?
But can't you see it in my face
a love that aches my very soul

Like Mars, ' I'll catch a grenade for ya!'
but you must be Venus...do you not see
it is my will I am stuck in love?

'Te amo tanto que me duele!'
You gaze into my pupils and
seem oblivious to my amor
God free me from this dolor!

[EMoffat]

"I love you so much it hurts" - nice poem, did you write it?? Short, but definetely sweet thanks for putting it up.

[Jaime Lync]

Thanks EMoffat. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I wrote it.
It would have been unlawful of me to share someone else's poetry and not give them the props they deserve - I believe in stealing lines but ripping off an entire poem would be plagiarism and that's a no no.

[Czarmaine AM]

This is such a sweet poem. Found myself smiling when I read the second line because yeah, I didn't get it! Haha. Loved the mix of English and Spanish in this piece. <3

[deepgal]

wow...wonderful

[Amagine]

This is a great poem, Jaime! You made me realize that I need to get back writing!

[Jaime Lync]

Thanks everyone for reading and commenting. Amagine, I just recently started writing again as well.