Insomnia

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Salman Waheed
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Insomnia

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A pair of red moons appeared on my window.
Domes of blood in the face of faded glow.
Rising up on the toes; climbing on the dark sky.
Wakeful eyes looked for the treasure once close by.
Envying me lying unsullied by her woes in a calm sleep.
She shrieked and stole from me my treasured deep.
Now, I look for the treasure once close by,
And she lies oblivious to my woes in a deep sleep.
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Gabyap
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Post by Gabyap »

I like the hidden message here and the symbolism
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