Official Review: Metzra by M. U. Phoenix

[kwahu]

The ideas could have made a great piece of work, if only the author had noticed the gaps. Too bad it's all floating in the air.

[kislany]

I'm glad at least the book was less than 100 pages. Must have made it easier to wade through it and await its ending. Great review as always, kandscreeley. I like how you even kept your paragraphs shorter to match the length of the book.

[Steph K]

Wow, this book sounds like quite a mess. I reviewed one with similar problems once. Poor editing is one of the hardest things to read.

[kandscreeley]

Thanks guys. I hope that maybe the author can get a good editor and fix things up a little bit!

[Gingerbo0ks]

Oh no! It started like it could have been good! Thanks for persevering and the review though.

[kandscreeley]

Thanks gingerbooks...

[MarisaRose]

Sounds like I'll pass on this one. Too bad it was such a struggle to get through; glad you made it to the end at least!

[kandscreeley]

Thanks Marisa... I appreciate your comments.

[ReyvrexQuestor Reyes]

Reading your review, and knowing the duration of the work, I am inclined to believe that the book is yet unfinished both in its book proper and editing. Thanks for the information.

[kandscreeley]

Thanks Reyvrex. You may be right.

[Jeremie Mondejar]

Well done review! I tried to magine the scene but I can't relate even if I like fairy tales. Thanks for sharing.

[Njengnjoro]

What a letdown. I hope the author will revise on this work.

[Mallory Whitaker]

What a bummer. The premise of this book sounds so promising, it's a shame it wasn't executed well. Thanks for the great review. I'll be skipping this one.

[Guy Johnson]

Thanks for the review. I can understand if a book does not work out in terms of plot or flow but grammar and common spelling errors really confuse me. Why bother publish and not pay a little more for editing?

[Mtsweni Nelsy]

There is nothing more discouraging than to read a book with a handful of errors. Thanks for the review.