Official Review: Notes in the Key of Heartbreak
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Official Review: Notes in the Key of Heartbreak

3 out of 4 stars
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Notes in the Key of Heartbreak is a book of poetry by Imani McGee-Stafford. McGee-Stafford is a current member of the Atlanta Dream-a WNBA team-and has branched out into the literary world to share her love of poetry. As a prelude to her first poem, the author uses a quote by F. Scott Fitzgerald: “And in the end, we were all just humans…Drunk on the idea that love, only love, could heal our brokenness.” This quote sets the tone for a moving collection of poetry, centered around the author's disappointments in love and her quest to achieve self-love.
The collection is sixty poems in length, broken into three sections, with a pertinent quote segueing each transition. The bulk of the individual poems are under a page in length; some are merely a few lines. The author pours her heart onto the page and it is easy to get caught in a feeling of empathy for her tribulations in love. The pieces are relatable, underscoring the confusion, apathy, and hurt that go hand-in-hand with a failed relationship. The author gradually reveals her awareness that in order to love another, you must first truly love yourself.
What I enjoyed about this book is the vulnerability contained in the author's words. Having my own predilection to poetry, I can appreciate the poignancy of a no-holds-barred approach to this genre. The author's writing style is straightforward, leaving nothing for the reader to unveil or surmise. She is heartfelt and sincere, delivering a raw look at her struggles and the lessons she has learned the hard way.
I did have some hang-ups about the book. First, several of the poems are lacking a title; rather, the title is the first sentence of the poem. If this technique had only been used once, I would have found it creative and intriguing. Secondly, there is a distinct monochromatic tone to the material. I understand the author’s intention to have a congruent theme, but I felt it was overly monotonous and somewhat depressing. I believe this issue would be alleviated if the author selected twenty-five (or so) of her favorite pieces and reformatted this book into a chapbook. She could then revisit a full-length book at a later date, introducing additional themes.
The book was well-polished and free of errors. My preference would be to rate this book 2.5 stars, as I feel measures could be taken to maintain the reader’s interest. Since half-stars aren’t an option, I have rated this book 3 out of 4 stars. All-in-all, it is a nice effort and the author should feel proud of producing a respectable work of poetry.
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Hi,bigirimanacelestin wrote: ↑09 Apr 2018, 09:06 The author gradually reveals her awareness that in order to love another, you must first truly love yourself. I agree with the author about this. If someone never love himself it is easy to him to become a terrorist. To kill himself become an act of hornor. Thanks for your review.
What an interesting perspective, thank you for your input.
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Hi,kandscreeley wrote: ↑09 Apr 2018, 09:28 Wow! A multi-talented woman. A member of the WNBA and a poet. I wish I was into poetry, but I think that it would be lost on me. Still, I admire the author for putting herself out there like this! Thanks.
I would imagine it to be especially difficult to share such personal things when in the public eye. Then again, maybe that's why she thrives in that arena-she is able to out it all out there.
Thanks for reading

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Hi again,
I tend to prefer my poetry with some hidden meanings, but that is just a matter of personal opinion. In poetry, there's really no right or wrong way to expressing oneself. Thanks for reading

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I'm sorry for your tough experience but I'm glad you were able to take away something constructive from it. Thank you reading and commenting.RoselineIjeoma wrote: ↑09 Apr 2018, 16:01 Wow this book really touched me. I tried loving someone but they keep on breaking my heart. I have learnt to start loving myself first.
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Thank you for reading and for your feedbackLibs_Books wrote: ↑10 Apr 2018, 13:50 I think this is a very fair-minded review. I don't mind so much when a poem doesn't have a title, but a monotonous collection of poems about heartbreak is not something that would appeal to me.

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