Paranormal Elements
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Re: Paranormal Elements

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That's a really good point, I have found that used incorrectly paranormal experiences can seem silly and even detract from the story.cristinaro wrote: ↑04 Jun 2018, 07:52 I don't know what would have happened with this book if the paranormal elements had not been right there to keep it together. Although Angela's blackouts seem ridiculous at times, they make the time switches possible and provide clues to find the missing painting. I also have the feeling Belle Ami plans to exploit them further in the next books of the series.
It's hard to tell in the first book of a series, it may be something that the author builds on in future instalments.
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You could simplify the plot and say the plot is just about finding the painting, but then you would have to take out the part about reincarnation and the past lives leading them to the painting, so on and so forth. So much of this story would be different without the paranormal aspect.
All the past lives played an active part in the story, not just in her visions.
There would have to be another way for them to find the painting and everything, which would change the characters altogether, as well as the character development.
I don't know, I just feel like the paranormal aspect played such a big part, that it literally wouldn't be the same story anymore. At all. And none of the characters would be the same.
That's basically like saying keep the same basic plot, but change literally everything else; rewrite the entire book.
At that point, the title might not have even been the same; in fact, it may have become irrelevant.
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