What did Cynthia facing constant danger do for the book?
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Re: What did Cynthia facing constant danger do for the book?
Her supposed skill in hand to hand could have come in handy plenty of times in the story, but never did.Ferdinand_otieno wrote: ↑28 Jun 2019, 20:02Yes, her badassery is severly lacking in this book.Nisha Ward wrote: ↑28 Jun 2019, 16:54I wish it were just a case of that, but I don't think she was being portrayed as imperfect. We're supposed to believe that she's badass with a side of vulnerability but the first part never actually comes through in the narrative.
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It could what he had planned to do, characterising an overflawed protagonist, but that also makes her unrelatable and confusing.
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I feel like she helped build the suspense in the book for the first few chapters but afterwards, Empathy fatigue might have set in, and her constant way of getting into precarious situations became monotonous.
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Added to that, it's hard to believe that she was ever in any real peril at all.Ferdinand_otieno wrote: ↑29 Jun 2019, 06:17I feel like she helped build the suspense in the book for the first few chapters but afterwards, Empathy fatigue might have set in, and her constant way of getting into precarious situations became monotonous.
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A protagonist who meets a character who is creepy (by all accounts and in a realistic standpoint) and dangerous, but ends up marrying him. That is very unrealistic, and unbelievable.ElizaBeth Adams wrote: ↑29 Jun 2019, 08:35 The potential for danger did fuel the plot. I kept reading to see how the various situations would resolve themselves. I didn't usually find the way they were resolved very realistic. For example, I found Sky to be very creepy, and even dangerous for Cynthia to be around. Yet she ends up marrying him. It that sense, the constant danger wasn't a successful device.
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At some point, you had to question why her "inquisitive nature" always led to precarious situations and it should have become predictable from there on out.Fatima_Palacios wrote: ↑28 Jun 2019, 12:35agree it was not forgettable but predictableNisha Ward wrote: ↑26 Jun 2019, 13:52Did it though? I mean, it was kind of predictable for a while there.Lucas Kalinic wrote: ↑26 Jun 2019, 11:41 Cynthia facing constant danger was a big boost for suspense in the novel. Yes, she made certain wrong moves and I was always inquisitive on learning what was going to next happen to her.
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So, yes. I found the book thrilling with the Cynthia's character.
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Again, I must ask, with the exception of the miscarriage, was she ever even really in danger?AntonelaMaria wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 14:16 After a certain time, Cynthbia facing danger became redundant.
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Excellent point!!! Hm, maybe the question is overhyped as I didn't particularly find this book suspenseful. Danger definitely is not the correct term to use.Nisha Ward wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 14:24Again, I must ask, with the exception of the miscarriage, was she ever even really in danger?AntonelaMaria wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 14:16 After a certain time, Cynthbia facing danger became redundant.
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I'm leaning towards that view myself, to be quite honest.AntonelaMaria wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 16:25Excellent point!!! Hm, maybe the question is overhyped as I didn't particularly find this book suspenseful. Danger definitely is not the correct term to use.Nisha Ward wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 14:24Again, I must ask, with the exception of the miscarriage, was she ever even really in danger?AntonelaMaria wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 14:16 After a certain time, Cynthbia facing danger became redundant.
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It certainly makes it more compelling and captivating.AntoineOMEGA wrote: ↑30 Jun 2019, 11:36 In a way it shows how we learn. She was rash and made some big mistakes, but she learned from them and did her best to fix the problems she earlier invited. It makes the story more real when the character isn't perfect.
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